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Small-Town Heart Part 2 of 2 (Conclusion) โ€ข 4 min read

Part 2: The Truth and The Resolution

Fiction ยท A Pine Hollow Story ยท The Conclusion of The Little Boy Who Stayed Behind for Pie

The Little Boy Who Stayed Behind for Pie (Part 2 Ending)

Dot stood on the sidewalk in her apron and waved both arms. The truck did not slow down. It went past the feed store and over the rise and was gone.

She came back in rubbing her arms. Benny was crying now, quietly, into his one mitten.

"Grandma," Tyler said softly. "Half the men in this county drive a red pickup."

"I know it."

"He's five. He might not even know his own grandpa's truck."

"I know it, hon." Dot sat down next to the boy and put her arm around him. "But he knew it was his grandpa's truck the way I'd know my own kitchen. So now we know Grandpa's out driving around this morning, and he doesn't know Benny's missing either."

She looked at the pie book. Sixty-three names. Then she looked at the boy.

You cannot ask a scared child to remember. You have to let him play until he remembers on his own.

* * *

Dot brought out the sugar caddy and dumped all the packets on the counter. White ones, pink ones, the brown raw sugar ones that hardly anyone used.

"Benny, I bet you can't sort these into piles faster than Tyler."

He could. He beat Tyler three times. By the fourth time he had stopped crying and started bossing. He lined the packets up like cattle in a pen and pushed them along the counter one at a time.

Then he picked up a spoon, held it like a microphone, and started to talk very fast.

It was not words, exactly. It was a quick, rolling, sing-song rhythm. Dollar-bid-now-two, now-two, will-ya-give-me-two. Dot had heard that rhythm her whole life. Half the children who grew up near a sale barn had tried it at least once.

But it was the ending that made Dot set down her coffee.

Benny banged the spoon down on the counter like a gavel. "Sold," he announced. "To the lady with good sense."

* * *

Tyler did not understand why his grandmother had started to laugh.

Dot pointed at the blue ribbon taped to the side of the cash register. In August, at the Calder County Fair, her sour cream raisin pie had gone for two hundred and ten dollars in the pie auction. Ray Dunbar had called the bids himself. When the gavel fell, he had pointed straight at her across the barn and hollered the same thing he had hollered at the sale barn for forty years.

Sold, to the lady with good sense.

Ray was the only man in Calder County who said it. Anyone else would have been laughed out of the barn.

"Benny," Dot said. "Does your grandpa sell cows?"

Benny nodded hard. "He talks super fast. And he lets me hit the hammer."

Ray Dunbar. Seventy years old, with a daughter who had married and moved to Pittsburgh a good while back. Dot had not seen Kristen since before this boy was born. She had stood in the pie line this morning with a baby on each hip, and Dot had not known her.

And Ray was not home carving a turkey. He was at the sale barn, because holidays don't count to cows.

Dot picked up the phone and dialed the sale barn office from memory.

* * *

Ray answered on the sixth ring, out of breath, like he had walked in from the pens.

"Calder County Sale Barn."

"Ray Dunbar, this is Dot. Where is your grandson?"

There was a pause. "Which one? Benny's with Kristen in the van. Why?"

"No, hon," Dot said. "He is not. He's sitting at my counter, sorting my sugar packets, and he just sold me a pink one."

She heard a long silence. Then she heard Ray's keys hit the floor.

* * *

Ray made it from the sale barn to Main and Elm in eleven minutes, with Benny's father white as paper in the passenger seat. Kristen's van came in right behind them from the other direction. Earl's Crown Victoria pulled up last, with sawdust on the bumper from the sycamore.

The bell over the door rang three times in a row.

Kristen dropped to her knees and wrapped Benny up so tight that his big hat fell off. She was crying and laughing at once, saying, "I thought you were with Daddy. I thought you were with Daddy."

"I was with the pie," Benny explained.

Ray stood in the doorway with his hand on the frame. For a man who could talk faster than any man in four counties, he did not seem able to say anything at all.

Dot went behind the counter, took a sour cream raisin pie out of the case, and set it in a white box. She tied it with string and handed it to him.

"On the house," she said. "For your table."

Ray finally found his voice. It was rough. "Dot, I don't know how to thank you."

"You already did, back in August." She nodded at Benny. "He learned it from you."

Ray looked down at his grandson. Then he cleared his throat, pointed at her across the counter, and said it, the way he had said it ten thousand times.

"Sold. To the lady with good sense."

* * *

At noon, Dot unlocked the door again for anybody in town who had nowhere else to eat. She did it every Thanksgiving. Tyler set out the plates. Floyd Eckert came back in his good tie. The old range ticked as it warmed.

Sweeping under the counter before the first guests arrived, Dot found one small red mitten under stool number six.

She set it on the shelf by the register with the reading glasses and the single gloves, where lost things in her diner waited, sometimes for years, until somebody came back for them.

* * *
โ€” The End โ€”
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